We Help Fantasy Writers Craft Stories that Captivate Readers
Discover what’s holding your manuscript back and get a clear, actionable plan to fix it.
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GREAT STORIES DON'T JUST HAPPEN.
THEY ARE METICULOUSLY CRAFTED.
The truth is that if you want to craft a story readers love, it takes more than stringing together events that happen to a central character.
A lot more.
We’re here to help.
We Help You Implement Proven Techniques & Strategies to Hook Readers from Page 1 Until the End
Because your readers shouldn’t be able to put your book down. 🥂
Readers crave stories that make them feel something.
They want to be swept up in twists, turns, and emotional stakes — to see themselves in the characters and feel every triumph, heartbreak, and revelation.
But why do some stories captivate readers while others fall flat?
It comes down to structure.
Plot and character are inseparable. The plot shapes the characters, and the characters’ choices drive the plot.
But without the right structure, even the most dramatic twists and compelling characters can feel… off. Moments fall flat. Pacing drags. Conflict fizzles.
Great stories are built on solid structure.
When your story’s structure works, readers are fully invested. They root for your characters, gasp at every twist, and keep turning pages.
When it doesn’t, readers disengage — and you’re left wondering why your story isn’t landing.
At Fiction Refinery, we help you pinpoint where your story isn’t quite hitting the mark and show you how to fix it.
Through a Story Diagnostic, we’ll identify what’s working, what’s not, and how to optimize your plot and character arcs to create an unforgettable reading experience.
👉 Your readers deserve a story they can’t put down. Let’s make sure you give them one.
Let Us Help You Craft A Story That…
Hooks Your Readers
You only get one chance to make a great first impression. We’ll help you optimize your opening scene so readers are invested from the very first page.
Practically Sells Itself
Word of mouth is the best marketing you’ll ever get. Craft a story readers love, and they’ll be eager to share it with friends, family—even strangers.
You Are Proud Of
Stop second-guessing your story. Gain the confidence that comes from knowing you’ve done your best to craft your story.
Results Our Past Clients Are Already Getting:
Our clients’ success speaks volumes.
“With the feedback Jennifer provided, I now have a story that I feel ready to publish.
My beta readers would agree and are already fans of my work. Before investing in a developmental edit, I struggled with knowing what needed improvement in my story. This was beyond anything I expected. Amazing feedback.”
“The comprehensive depth of the edit blew me away.”
“Analysis of everything down to the scene level was thorough and exhaustive and provided clear, concrete steps I can take to keep building the story.”
Get Expert Help
Maximize Your Story’s Impact and Boost Your ROI with Expert Guidence.
FREE Story Diagnostic
A Story Diagnostic gives you clarity on your manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses, so you can stop second-guessing and start making progress toward your publishing goals.
We’ll complete a high-level review your story’s plot and character arcs to uncover what’s holding your story back — and give you actionable steps to improve.
With clear, personalized insights, you’ll know exactly where to focus your revisions so you can craft a story that hooks readers and keeps them turning pages.
Book Your Story Diagnostic Today! 👇
Story Diagnostic FAQs
How is it different from a Manuscript Evaluation or a Developmental Edit?
During a Story Diagnostic, we’ll review your story’s first scene, outline, and blurb/summary and provide high-level feedback on potential plot and character issues. This is a great place to start if you’re not sure whether your manuscript needs a manscript evaluation or a developmental edit.
A manuscript evaluation, while still a high-level review, involves the editor reading the full manuscript and providing feedback in an editorial letter.
A developmental edit also focuses on the big picture, but goes more in-depth (reviewing things like theme, setting, etc.) and includes in-line comments within the manuscript in addition to an editorial letter.
What if I don't have a blurb or an outline?
We’ll ask you to create one before the Story Diagnostic. These documents help us get a feel for your story.
They don’t have to be perfect! But they should give us an idea of what’s going on inside your manuscript.
Does a Story Diagnostic cost anything?
The Story Diagnostic is completely FREE!
After you receive the diagnostic, if you want more help and identifying specific areas of your story that could be strengthened, you’ll have an opportunity to work with us more closely via one of our editing packages.
But there is no obligation to book an edit. 🙂
Can anyone get a Story Diagnostic?
Any writer with a fantasy manuscript can receive a free Story Diagnostic.
Just keep in mind, that we can only complete so many each month, so there is a limited number offered on a first-come, first-served basis.
WONDERING WHAT TO DO NOW THAT YOU’VE FINISHED YOUR FIRST DRAFT?
Discover the exact steps to producing a polished book that hooks readers from beginning to end. Inside the FREE Editing Roadmap, you’ll find a step-by-step process that helps you save time and money on editing your book.
