You Can Craft an Unforgettable Story that Your Readers Love
Great books aren’t just written—they’re carefully crafted. I’m here to help you refine your story into one that captivates readers and lingers in their hearts long after the last page.
Client Satisfaction
Years Writing & Studying Stortelling
Fantasy & Romance Books Read & Analyzed
Does Any Of This Sound Familiar?
You’ve revised your book so many times, but you’re not sure if it’s actually getting better.
It’s difficult to know when it’s time to stop revising big-picture issues and move on to the next phase of editing. I’ll show you what is working and what’s not working, and I’ll give you practical advice on how to improve it. No more making changes you hope will make your story better.
You’re getting conflicting advice from peers and beta readers, and you have no idea what actually needs to be fixed.
Getting conflicting advice can be more frustrating than receiving no feedback at all. I share feedback based on writing and storytelling principles that are tried and true. Every suggestion is accompanied with an explanation telling you why you should consider making a change.
You don’t want to lose what makes your story special, but you know that, with the right changes, it could be even better.
I’m here to help you tell your story in an optimal way. The goal is to help you craft a story your ideal readers will LOVE. I’ll help you check the boxes your reader cares about (knowingly or unknowingly)—not make your story generic. My goal is to help bring your vision to life, even if it changes over the course of our time working together.
Get clear, actionable feedback that guides your revisions so that you can craft an unputdownable story.
My Mission
When we work together, I have one goal, and that’s to help you tell the best possible version of your story so that you can hook readers and start achieving your author dreams.
My approach to coaching is simple: I’ll learn about your vision for your story and your publishing goals. Then, I’ll dive into critical portions of the manuscript taking notes on the structure, plot, character arcs, and theme. Lastly, I’ll consider your goals, trends in the market, and your story before sharing suggestions for improvement.
How Coaching Works
Immersive, 1:1 coaching experience that emphasizes a collaborative approach to amplify and refine your story.
This collaborative process is a space where you can push the boundaries and discover your strength as a writer and storyteller so that you can confidently publish your book.
During this experience, you’ll get more than just the deliverables:
- Improved confidence in your ability as a writer and storyteller.
- Increased knowledge about the art and science of storytelling.
- Hundreds of hours saved from endless revisions.
- Renewed excitement about your story.
This is the right next step for you if…
- You've received conflicting feedback from peers or beta readers.
- You feel like you're just making different mistakes with each revision.
- You've revised your story a lot, but you're not sure it's improving.
How It Works:
Coaching
Every coaching call is tailored to what your story needs most right now. Whether we’re untangling a tricky plot point, clarifying your protagonist’s arc, or strengthening the emotional throughline, we’ll focus on the issues that will make the biggest difference in your manuscript.
We’ll discuss what’s working, what’s not, and what steps to take next, so you leave with clarity, confidence, and a concrete plan to move forward.
Implementation
After each call, you will have a list of relevant action items to complete. If you have any questions or get stuck while implementing, you will have direct access to me via email.
I Have 3 Coaching Packages for You to Choose From:
3-Month Package Includes:
6 60-minute calls plus email support ($997 investment).
2-Month Package Includes:
4 60-minute calls plus email support ($800 investment).
1-Month Package Includes:
2 60-minute calls plus email support ($500 investment).
Check Out the Results Our Clients are Already Getting:
The comprehensive depth of the edit blew me away.
Analysis of everything down to the scene level was thorough and exhaustive and provided clear, concrete steps I can take to keep building the story.
With the feedback Jennifer provided, I now have a story that I feel ready to publish.
My beta readers would agree and are already fans of my work. Before investing in a developmental edit, I struggled with knowing what needed improvement in my story. This was beyond anything I expected. Amazing feedback.
Meet Your Editor
Hey, there! 👋
I’m Jennifer.
My love for reading and writing began in high school, so choosing to study English in university was an easy decision. While there, I focused on literature and creative writing, receiving critiques and participating in workshops. My writing improved, but I still felt no closer to figuring out how to write a truly compelling novel.
After graduating, I decided to dig deeper on my own. I studied the fantasy genre to uncover what made popular books so successful. I read craft books to learn what seasoned authors thought contributed to their success. That’s when I discovered the piece missing from my education: storytelling.
Great books aren’t just beautifully written—they tell compelling, well-structured stories. This realization completely changed the way I approach writing. Instead of focusing solely on language and sentence structure, I began exploring how stories are built, how tension and conflict work, and how to create narratives readers can’t put down.
